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it was a mid winter evening the wind was chilly and breezy as i walked to my frenids house from school. as i strolled through the park i could hear the squeeals of the little kids when they were hit bye snow balls. i walked up to a brown house and jumped up the stairs onto a porch i knocked on a big wooden brown door. the first thing i heard was “Oh hello eloise what could i do for you?” said the tall 31 year old woman(which was my best friends mom she is ten and so was i.) i replyed with “miss carter i am here to see katlyn.”. “as always right?” said miss carter. “right.” i said giggling. “she is in her room doing her homework.” she said. “Ok thank you.” i said. i walked in to the the living room and into the hallway. i was about to open the brown door that said “KATLYN’S ROOM. KNOCK FIRST!” which was new so i did what it told me i knocked.”come in!” said katlyn. so i opened the door and said “hey katlyn whats up?”"nothing.whats up with you?” said a girl with blue eys and brown hair and a cute smile. “oh nothing like always.” i said “so are you ready?”. “yeah let me get my skates ok?” she said. “yeah,ok.” i replyed. i sat on the really soft bed. “ok i am ready.”she said as ahe put on a blueish back jacket as she grabed a back pack.”so where are we going this time?” she asked. “oh no where specail just the park pond is that ok?” i said. “yeah thats fine.” said the ten year old. we walked throught her door back into the hallway.”ok,mom we are going to the park to skate!” she said to her mom. “ok please please please be carefull,ok!?” said the mom.”yeah ok as always mom bye i love you.” said katyln. so we walk was we through snow balls at each other. as katlyn tried to throw a snow ball at me i ducked and it hit a guy be hind me(he was the cutest guy in the whole school his name was johnathon.) he wasn’t mad he was shocked. i ran behind a tree and and i was whispering loudly to her leather hair lace up “hurry come on over here!” but she wouldn’t move.she was so embarassed and shocked. she had her hands cuffed over her mouth that was wide open a fly could fly in! he started at her and said “what was that for?!” but nice and laughing. she said “i am so sorry i was aming for eloise.” and he said “ELOISE she’s here?!” katlyn said “yeah she’s here why?”"oh no resson.” he said. “are you guys going some where?” he said. “uh yeah skating at the pond.” she said. “oh can i come?” he said “yeah you can.” she said . “ELOISE YOU CAN COME OUT NOW!” said katlyn. so i shyly came out from behind the tree. “hey johnathon how are you?”i said “oh i am fine what about you?” he said “oh fine.”"uh kay are we leaving now?” i said “uh yeah ell we are,come on john.” she said. “what your coming to johnathon?” i said “yeah unless you don’t want me there?” he said “no no come on lets go all three of us.”. so we walked talking and laughing about what happend and out of no where. BOOM! “OW!” said kay. “kay are you ok?!” i said . “yeah i am fine.”said kay. johnaton helped her up. she smiled at him and said”thanks john.”you welcome.” he said. “COME ON YOU SLOW- POKS HURRY UP!” i said. “ELL WAIT UP! COME ON JOHN!” said kay. finnaly we got there i pulled my old beat up skates out of my blue back-pack and so did kay. i put them on and laced them up and then got up and went to the ice. kay finnaly got there. i did the jumps and a tripple south-cow and kay and i did are routen john clapped and laughed. when we were done we went for ice cream in the town. i love that ice cream parlor. it is like the 50’s dinners with the red leather boothes and spinny stilt chairs and the neon clock and the out-fits they wear the little ice cream hats that look like the paper boats upside down. “hello kids what could i get ya?”. “well?” said kay “can i have the vanilla chocolat swirl?” said kay. “yes you may young laddy.”"and for you kind sir” said the ice cream guy. “uh ell you go first.” said john. “uh ok thanks john.can i have the very very chocolat cherry?” i said. “yes you may.here you go miss.” said the guy. “thank you.” as i went to the booth with kay. john ordered the same thing as me. we ate it all and nothig was left kay went home and i didn’t have to go home till a while so my and john walked around the park. “hey,ell can i tell you somethig?” he said “of course johny.” i said to be nice but i really didn’t want to know. and he started to talk really fast.”so if you like a girl but you are not sure if they like you and you don’t want to tell them because you are really good friends and you don’t want to mess up your friendship….what do you do?”he said. ” uh all i can say is tell them and even if she dosen’t like you i know you will always be friends but trust me she really dose like you i mean really.” thinking that he was talking about kay but man was i way off! “ok so i should just tell them?” he said.”yeah and hope for the best.” i said. “ok here it gose.” thinking “here gose what?” but then i finnaly get it i mean get it i mean really good. “ell i always liked you since we were best friends in kindergarden and i kept that secret all along.so will you be my girlfriend?” he said me stund not blinking not even talking just my mouth wide open like a doufes!”ell?ell you there eloise?”. “john i…” looking at his face desprate for me to be his love. “ok why not i will be your girlfriend.” i said. “REALLY YOU WILL!” he said. so happy he kissed me on the cheek acually on both cheeks. i let it slide. pulling out somethig from his back-pack here it was a black & gold box “here open it.” he said opening it it was a juciey coutuer braclet a real sold gold braclet with one charm that said i <3 u. "johny i..i don't no waht to say." i said. "how about.'put it on'?" TO BE CONTINUED.... PLEASE NO MEAN ANSWERS I AM A YOUNG GIRL IN ELEMENTRY SCHOOL IN THE SECOND GRADE.
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